Dark path lit
by moonlights stare,
on you stumble, unaware
of eyes that watch as you go by
you take a breath, they do sigh.
Since aeons past they wait in vain
for you alone, they know your name
and now you come as was foretold
the ancient prophecy will unfold.
To aid them all in their last fight,
cast aside the chains of night
in search of power over Death
this graveyard seeks your final breath.
LadyP©2011


















Good and dark, like it like that, sometimes
All the Best, my friend
Peace, xx
Laz
Hey You Where Have You Got To?
Well you’ve been warned
At this rate I will be sending the Zombies
out tp look for you and you know what
they are like?
so get your skates on and let’s have a
new posting added PRONTO
I do hope that you are alright Lady Pen
Androgoth XXx
Don’t go there, Pen!
Great forward motion. Love the rhymes and the approach to meter.
The cemetaries in Europe are often designed like parks, such peaceful and beautiful resting places. Actually that’s were we often played as kids … looking for snails, chasing bunnies, helping the caretaker carry the wreaths to fresh graves rirgt after a funeral … I know it sounds a bit macabre, but it was “fun” … Woofs, and purrrs and tweets, my lovely friend. Always, cat.
Wish i can continue
in there the dead doth lay
the toils of life they doth not pay
for as a babe they came empty
the grave cannot fill the richness plenty
for to what doth the dead worry
or their early departure made sorry
life a song played to destinys hand
life that end in graveyards tombstone stand
Just calling by to wish you a
fangtastic weekend Lady Pen
Androgoth XXx
I absolutely
love
the way you
present
your poetry.
Your pages are interesting, intriguing, engaging,
and
thought
PROVOKING.
Wonderful poem and the creativity of layout to have the poem appear as a headstone with the last line being the grave yard’s earth-beautiful.
I love how some of your poems have a slightly different angle at the end….I love to be surprised….this was great
Awesome. You have a great talent. Enjoy writing, it brings me much joy.
mystic, dark, beautiful!!!!!