Do you ever feel not quite ‘with it’
As if the world is a little askew,
it makes everything seem off balance,
I wonder, have you felt this way too?
Do you ever look all about you.
see others going their own way
making you feel quite lost and alien
Misunderstanding what they say?
Do you ever feel totally invisible,
when you’re walking a crowded street,
being rudely pushed this way and that,
Ignored by every passer by you meet?
Do you ever meet the eye of a stranger
feel a link though you know it can’t be
maybe it’s someone from a past life
Is there more to living than you can see?
Have you ever wondered the reason for living,
questioned the meaning of your life to date,
why you’re here, what task you’ve been given
Or is it all in the hands of fate?
If you do, perhaps you understand me
how I feel , as if I don’t quite belong
It seems we follow our own personal drum beat,
it’s all we can do, ‘til we’ve sung our last song……
LadyP © 2010
Good day Lady P,What would we do without our sense of humors. More importantly, we must be able to laugh at ourselves. I am a people watcher and when I meet people I like to have eye contact. They truly are designed as the windows of our soul.Friendships, over time, will reveal our hearts.No matter what, there is the right place where we all belong. All that is asked of us is if we want to come along.Have a tremendous Thursday…Greg
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Its all trueFor its the path we choosehearts desire win or looseNot by commands and forceA different path we choosedejavu a strange familiarity of being therePondering thoughts when and wherein the strangers eye to findhis thoughts running the mind Played the tune the Hamlin piperRats to follow to end in the pierBirth and death the worldly waythe path we choose the difference to paywhat u wrote is true we all see it happen go with the world u are not pushesagainst the world we are pushed
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Hi LadyP, I have always been told I march to the beat of a different drummer. Mostly I feel on the outside looking in. Very thought provoking poem. Peace
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Lady Penelope..I Like This One My Good Friend, It Gives The Mind SomeNourishment, The Thought Processes A Gentle Push, Just Think.. In The Next Crowd Of Peeps You Are Mingled InWHO Might You Meet? A Very Interesting Script This..Androgoth XXx
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Sure LAdy Pi know where i belong now..it took me long timeawesome writing ..Perfect words.i hear my drum beatsound comes from the east..LAdy Pim trying to make my guest book openbut its not working.i dont know what i do wrongbut i keep on trying.i wont give upTCMj
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Yo Lady P! FAB Poem!!! I woz thinking, whilst reading it "well, yes I do"….."oooh I do that 2" …."Glad I aren’t the only one that feels that!" Thank u 4 the giggle u gave me with ur comment! Hope u have a Fab Friday! Luv PF XXX
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That strikes a cord well and truly, I think we all must feel like at least part of that lovely poem now and then. quite pwerful.
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Konnichiwa Lady P,I felt often that the first onelol! we have very similarity manners:-) and I ‘ll joing with you the last ones.Thank you for sharing that it most enjoyed after I read a sad story of Lisa’s brother……Happy mother day to you on 9th May Sunday. Big Hugs,Michiko
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Thank you for stopping by my space and leaving a comment. I think sometimes I know where I belong and at other times, I don’t.
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passing eyes in foghave metyet I pass on bya nerve you have twanged
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Yes angel eyes
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Hope u had a great week end the elections endin out county elections are a drum beat one in five years sometimes earlya drama played
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Hi Lady PYes I do.. most of the time I do…….when i feel the above….. i think .. this is not permanent.. this feeling will overcrowded with another feeling…Thanks for your wonderful gift.. I love the tree.. cha
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I am always wondering why things are the way they are. My mind is very creative and I’m smart but it also never shuts off. I analyze every situation and think about things way too much. I always go back and forth between certain thoughts and viewpoints and it seems like I’m always contradicting myself. Uuugh! :o)
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Hey, Pen! Loved this, but I really have to say…you couldn’t possibly be that old yet to have days like that. As for me, it’s EVERY day. Sheesh….god, what was I saying. Seriously, I had a thread going in my head and now have lost the entire thing. See?
XOXOXO
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Glad you enjoyed it Jenny, the theme of self questioning, self doubt etc…is one I go to quite a lot, introspection seems to be my favourite theme…xx
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