Thought Control……

PhotobucketThere’s a very special magic hat,
it’s invisible you see…..
it’s only seen by clever folk …
(that’s you and me)
If you place it on your head,
you can wish for anything
trouble is, it reads your mind,
so mayhem it may bring.
You could wish for Peace on Earth,
as a final ending to war
but it could grant Total Silence…
to last for evermore.
No birds will sing, no voice will ring,
nothing at all to hear
So control your thoughtful mind
and make your wish
very,
very
clear….….

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LadyP © 2010

 

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64 responses to “Thought Control……

  1. Love the way you write your poems, Pen🙂
    Here’s the thing about making a wish, I always believe that whatever we do, say or sometimes even think, can affect those around you and even those far away from you..I think there is something people say, about the flapping of a butterfly’s wings causing a hurricane some where? We are all linked, in one way or the other..and to wish for something, oh you are so right..it has to be thought of so, so carefully

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  2. Ha, ha – a nice take on “be careful what you wish for”, Pen😉

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  3. I am just calling by for another read of this one and to wish you a wicked rest of weekend Lady Pen I bet you are at this very minute enjoying a few glasses of chilled cava and being extremely greedy with those chocolates🙂

    Androgoth XXx

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    • ’tis one from last year Andro, glad you like it…I often wonder if I’m getting any better or …?… still wondering… Seen the warnings about lessening your drink intake to only three days a week… makes you wonder if peeps will take notice or just drink more or those specified days.😉 … (hic)
      Man U Play Man City today … and we’ll marmalise them…😀 … xxx

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  4. Really loved your imagination Lady P….

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  5. Wünsche dir einen schönen Sonnigen Sonntag lieber Gruss Gislinde

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  6. Wow I never thought of “peace on earth” in that way before! Fantastic poem Lady P!!:)
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  7. Yes, Pen, be careful what you wish for… be careful what you think. The good thing about having wishes granted is, obviously, we get what we think we want. The thing is, what we think we want may not be what is best for us. End the wish with ‘or something better for the good of all…’, and then know that what has been requested may be received but with all good intentions. I’m always wishing for things, but I don’t think I want a magic hat to help me to get them… the Universe is enough for me!
    I enjoyed your thought provoking poem, Lady P, and being very clear is the key!

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    • True enough Sir Aquatom, but on second thoughts, thinking about any wish or ‘asking’ the Universe, if we follow it through we could be getting in deeper than we bargained for… Keep it simple I suppose.. glad you enjoyed the pondering on this one … xx
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  8. With so many comments, perhaps someone else mentioned this, but it reminded me of an old horror movie called “Wishmaster” in which people always got their wishes, but not how they expected. I always thought the literal nature of the wishes, and how they became horrors, were very interestingly philosophical. Your hat is a dangerous toy. I think I shall stray from wishes for now in favor of sanity. My mind is certainly not the one to trust with a hat like that😉

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    • Neither is mine methinks VW, ’tis a dangerous hat, I know, but temptation overcomes the hardiest soul… I wonder if I could destroy it before it causes mayhem?… or mayhap it’s protected against such a ploy.., xx
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  9. coucou Miss Pen
    voilà une bonne idée d’écrit avec ce chapeau magique
    j’aime tes mots que j’ai pris le temps de parcourir plus longuement
    bises de Brest, bonne fin de semaine à toi

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    • and here I’m back having just visited you Paul, in Brest… I am so glad you enjoyed my magical hat poem… Wouldn’t it be a fantastic thing?… Maybe we could stop time with it… 😀 .. have a wonderful week-end. my friend. xPenx
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  10. oui merci de ta visite miss Pen, ça m’a bien fait plaisir de votre arrêt sur mes mots
    bises encore pour toi

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  11. Stopping by to say I miss you and hope all is well with you and yours, Pen.
    smiles and a warm feathery to you,
    love Raven xx

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  12. I wish for you to be well, filled with laughter and light, always,
    And may I add a Happy St. Patricks Day to that wish😀

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  13. myworldfulloflove

    omgeez so true!
    Add 1/2lb of wishes, a pint of dreams, 3/4 cups of hope, 11/2 glass of imagination Give it a mix and ….:Becareful what you wish for,🙂
    I don’t think i could wish for anymore than i have already been given. A hat so magical can never be destroyed, 🙂

    Thank you for another beautiful written poem, it’s lovely. you are amazing!

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