Time Gap…

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Sometimes
I feel quite alien,
as if mis-stepping in time.
The beat of life’s drum changes
as a constantly rewritten rhyme.
There’s no
thing to say I’m different,
as nothing makes me stand out
but greeting and meeting others
gives me pause and reason to doubt.
A feeling of strangeness lingers
as if a thin veil glides between
this and that other reality
Mayhap that is where I
should have been?
LadyP©2013

80 responses to “Time Gap…

  1. I won’t bother you with my prosaic comment except to liken this feeling like a beautiful mermaid that feels she’s part of two spiritual realms~ blessings dear Lady xoxo

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  2. I piece of me, I see in your moving poetry. Stirs my heart always. Thanks.

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  3. Lady Pen may I take Fyrespike on a little journey?🙂 How do you mean how do I maean?🙂 No I was hoping that I could use him in my side bar so that I can link directly to your Space from him and he is a jolly pipe smoking dragon so i figured he would enjoy sitting on my Space, just for a vacation I mean🙂 Have a fun weekend my great friend🙂

    Andro xxxx

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  4. Yes Pen I to feel that way , here there and everywhere take me to where I belong.
    Hope your day was a enjoyable one , it has been truly lovely weather for a change. Lucy in the sun and next in the shade she loves the great outdoors.
    Hugs Sheila
    Oh enjoy the Tennis on Sunday xx

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    • hi there Sheila, mayhap we all feel this way at sometime or another,🙂
      I’ll be watching Andy Murray beat Djokovic in straight sets, (I dream on of course, but who knows? 😉 ) I’ve commented on your site, but it seems to have disappeared into spam probably. my new post explains all. Hope you and Lucy too have a wonderful day of sunshine and shade, when requred as necessary. hugs to you both. xPenx

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  5. Oooooh it is like when you are in a room full of people yet you feel separate from them. I have felt that before. If you are an alien, you are blessed with the ability to write beautiful poetry x

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    • Your words are music to my ears, Christy, for at this moment I’m feeling rather down and much like an Alien who is now invisible to WordPress. Sheeesh!! be ever careful of what you write, it may in fact come true. Shivers!! xxx

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  6. Hi Pen I have Nominated you for the Semper Fidelis Award for rules ect go to http://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2013/07/06/semper-fidelis/ congrats and hugs aplenty!!xx

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    • Hi there Sweet Willow, you know I said I’d be here for a while yet? Well, watch this space, for I fear I have been ‘spammed’ into taking a rest. Me being the aforementioned ‘spammer’ apparently, for I cannot post a single solitary comment on anyone’s site. Akismet is sending me into oblivion. Which isn’t good for a comment orientated blogging arena. So it’s goodbye for now, ’til I hear from the powers that be, my lovely friend. hugs eternal xPenx (Alien I be, allegedly !!)

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      • I am so sorry to hear that Pen , you have managed to post here no problems! I do hope this will be sorted soon as I really will miss you if you go! Be well , be brave and most important be back!! Hugs eternal. xxxxxxxxxxx

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  7. Oh Pen, how to cheer you up. Let’s see if we can rustle up Mr Depp…

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  8. Fyrespike is enjoying his new abode😉🙂
    Well he would, being that the Wombies are
    feeding him pancakes, chocolate and lots
    of yummy wine gums and marshamallows😉

    Don’t be getting upset with WP there are always
    annoying little glitches that test our resolve babe
    but we are with you so don’t worry🙂

    Andro xxxx

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    • thanks as ever Andro, for your uplifting words of encouragement, I feel sure I’d have given up by now if it wasn’t for lovely response of friends, like you. Enjoy your well deserved break, and hope it’s somewhere exotic? 🙂 Take care my friend. xPenx

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  9. Lovely and delicious, Pen, gives me a bit of a shiver but it’s not scary. If you’re an alien, bring on the invasion!

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  10. This was so cool! I delayed commenting so I had some time to think about it, seeing as how I was sciving on the mobile at the time when I should definitely having been pretending to do some work! It would seem that finally I have found a fellow alien who can totally understand how this feels! Nothing wrong with being alien…it encourages the creative juices and exercises the imagination for blogs such as this fine blog🙂

    Connection very intermittent at present and laptop threatening to overheat all the time so don’t worry if I’m delayed commenting or commenting back to your comments…it’s all somewhere buried in the pipeline in the pending module!🙂

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    • Ah Wolfie, you can take as much time as you like, I find myself pontificating (can’t touch you for it you know? ) often. Fellow Alien, ’tis good to share, methinks alienicity (I just made up a word!!) should be positively encouraged, and oh dear the mother ships calling. bye for now and beaming your way soon hopefully!! xPenx

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  11. We missed you for so long, and I would so not want to see you disappear yet again my friend…. Loving all your poems… Sue xx

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  12. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words

    I feel as if I am in the in between world
    standing in the mists of time…sometimes here sometimes not…
    I hope you don’t disappear….I enjoy coming here in your space…
    I love this thought in rhyme you have painted…
    you have a magickal paintbrush….a true artist…
    )0(
    me

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    • my thanks LadyBlue. for your wonderful response, I hope not to disappear, ’tis almost like fighting an invisible force sometimes. Mayhap I shall be the victor? I do hope so.. xxx

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  13. you are there 🙂 Pen
    Peace, xx
    Laz

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