Moon-Gaze…

Moon Beams The Moon dressed
in all her white glory, stares
  down with ever careless gaze, at those
who worship her stark beauty, by looking
upward marking every phase.  Her spectral
light doth truly glisten, upon the restless ever
churning sea, as with every waxing ‘n
waning she lives, the tidal waves
follow her focal symmetry.
LadyP ©2014

73 responses to “Moon-Gaze…

  1. Who worhip har stark beauti by looking upward marking every phase her spectral light both truly glisten..
    her focal symmetry!!
    Michiko

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  2. Oh, this is a perfect work, Pen. Yes, we’re like the tide, caught under the Moon’s gracious spell, glistening with her reflected glory. You have captured the magic of her beauty so well.

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    • and you have given me a wonderful compliment, Vera, I’m glad you enjoyed my tribute poem so much. She is such an enthralling subject so it wasn’t difficult once I started …. xx

      Moon Beams

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  3. I love the symmetry of your prose, which I believe to be intentional–It looks like the moon!😀 I particularly love this line: “Her spectral
    light doth truly glisten, upon the restless ever
    churning sea…”

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  4. For some reason, a moonlit night like this, makes me feel the vastness of our earth and the smallness of me in it much more than a sunny day. I reflect, inwardly, in the presence of the moon because of that vastness.

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  5. Tender hearted words, a moon lite night “in all her white glory”;
    a curious reflection perhaps? well deserved, in my mind! with love, Eddie

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  6. This is a beautiful collection of words that portray the experience of moon worship, cause and effect and the beauty of nature, Pen. It is a very enjoyable set of verses that become more lovely with each reading. Like the sea the depth brings more substance to the read.

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    • A wonderful response, Steve, and glad you enjoyed this tribute to The Moon, … She holds a fascination, always, and I tried hard to put that into to words, glad that I managed it..🙂 xxx

      Moon Beams

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  7. I love the glistening “spectral light” image – a beautiful tribute to the power and glory of the moon

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  8. Beautifully written illustration of the magical powers of the moon.
    Bewitching and beguiling.
    Lovely Pen
    Ian

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  9. I want that beach and I want it now.
    Warm moon waters.
    Midnight picnics.

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    • Arrrrgh!!! I wish I knew where it was Eva, and I’d race you there… I saw a film recently where the hero had a beach house, totally beautiful surroundings and so, so quiet….I thought why can’t I have that? Lottery money would allow methinks…⭐ so fingers crossed, closed eyes and wish⭐ . 😀 xxx

      Moon Beams

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  10. lay Penny, merci de la lecture que je viens de faire là
    bisous et à bientot

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